Progress from feedback. I have moved the title down and move the splash headline up.
I have managed to change it from being on one page to an official DPS and have inserted 4 columns, I have added captions on the images to back up my point to why I decided not to change them, even after my feedback.
I have altered the text to strengthen my point.
I have changed the colour of the word "Classical" around to fit with the same colour scheme, brand identity as the masthead on the front cover. I have added the word contents as that is what I was told from my target audience feedback and have changed the image from the temporary picture to a medieval war themed pic that resembles the movies. I have changed the main feature (Splash) to fit with the new splash throughout the magazine and have made it the same colour as the rest of the text as this is also what I got from my feedback.
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